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The Secrets We Keep by Unit7 of the Fifth Dimension.

After watching a music video I became inspired to write this. This hasn't been edited(well the opening quote was) I think I could have done a much better job towards the end. But anyways enjoy. Smiling

“To truly love someone means to understand. To know their motives and reasons. When you cannot understand them, you allow them to explain and do your”
- Unit7 of the Sixth Dimension(close cousin who is trying to sound deep...)

Tyler walked briskly from through the campus as the afternoon sun reached its zenith. When he passed a group of friends he shrugged their invitations off and waved good bye. Tyler was on a mission and he couldn't let anyone or anything stand in his way. For the first time since he could remember he felt a powerful feeling at the pit of his heart. He had joked and teased his friends for becoming 'whipped' by their girlfriends. He had never had a lasting relationship and often became nothing more then a booty call. Now he wondered if he could ever return to that loveless existence.

Tyler found Sarah alone on the soccer field. At the sight of her Tyler felt his heart soar and the darkness of the world obliterated by her very presence. He stood there for a moment, admiring everything about her. The way her dark hair fluttered gently in the breeze. After he captured the image in his mind, he ran out to the field and wrapped his arms around her from behind. She gave a small start and quickly relaxed into Tyler's arms.
“What you doing out here alone?” Tyler asked. Sarah made a sniffling sound before replying.
“Just thinking,” her voice was strained and Tyler could tell she had been crying. He turned her around and looked deeply into her eyes. “Did I ever tell you I used to play?” She said as she broke from his arms. He let his arms fall to his side and watched as she ran off kicking a soccer ball. She played through the motions as if she were going up against an army. He enjoyed the performance all the way up until she scored against an invisible goalie. Tyler began clapping and shouting his praise as he began running towards her and embracing her in a tight hug.
“Why on earth did you quit?” He asked as they walked off the field.
“Problems at home,” she whispered, biting her fingernail. Tyler tried to look past the habit, knowing it meant she was hiding something. Tyler wrapped his arm around her shoulder and she snuggled close.

The rest of the afternoon was spent in a blissful state. No classes that day, nothing to do but to hang with each other at an old diner, the first place they met. The booth was private allowing them to be close without the prying eyes of others. When the meal came, a shake and french fires, they began feeding each other and laughing as they talked.
“I have to go,” Sarah said biting her fingernail. Her face became serious and distant as they scooted out of the booth. At the beginning of their relationship he had been annoyed by her seemingly abrupt leaving, often without a word of explanation.

Curiosity bested him, as he dropped her off at her house he drove around the block and returned, just down the street. He felt foolish and hated what he was thinking. There couldn't have been another guy, surely he would have known. An hour passed and as he was about to bring his car to life and drive to his dorm, he was stopped. He heard Sarah's door open and walk out to her car. As she pulled out of the drive way Tyler turned his car on and began following her.

He hated himself for doing this, he should be able to trust her, yet there was that gnawing feeling of curiosity persisted to drive him crazy. When she turned into the parking lot of a strip club, Tyler couldn't believe it. He had been there on occasion, mostly for bachelor parties. Sarah parked and didn't get out right away. Maybe it was just a stop? Picking up a friend? Tyler parked close by, hoping she wouldn't recognize his vehicle. After a moment, she stepped out and something came over Tyler. Anger, how could she do something so degrading? He left his car and ran up to her.
“What are you doing here?” He asked clenching his fists.
“Tyler!” Sarah said looking away.
“Please tell me your here to pick up a friend,” Tyler said as he trembled slightly.
“Just go home, please?” She turned her back on him but before she could leave Tyler grabbed her shoulder.
“Not until you explain.” He said not letting go. She turned around, her face hardened.
“I can't, I-” She whispered but was cut off.
“Is this man bothering you?” The bouncer said puffing out his chest.
“Earl it's fine. Tyler just go home.” She pleaded. He let go and allowed his arms to fall to his side. He clenched his teeth and felt a dull anger of betrayal beat at his temples. Tyler walked back to his car and sat there for a long time. Every guys fantasy was to get with a stripper, he had been living that little fantasy unknowingly. He didn't drive off and instead simply sat there in the dark, watching the bouncer do his work. When the bouncer's changed he gathered his nerve and entered the place. He looked at the bar, a busty blonde was standing behind the counter. He scanned the floor and when he still couldn't see Sarah he looked up on the stage. A blonde and a red head were pole dancing, slowly and seductively removing their clothing. Maybe he had just imagined seeing her? His relief was short lived when he heard the announcer call out Sarah's name. He froze, hoping against everything that it wouldn't be her. That it was some other Sarah. As the crowed began clapping and wolf whistling Sarah walked out. She wore a mini plaid skirt, and a black top tied in a knot. As the music began to play, she slowly began to dance. Tyler was both revolted and paralyzed at the sight. But there was something about her face that bothered him, her face looked distant and mournful. After breaking the spell binding dance, he left.

The next day on campus instead of finding Sarah he hung with his friends, trying to forget he had ever met her. When she found him, she tugged on his sleeve playfully. He looked over his shoulder and saw her gorgeous smile, in narrowed his eyes and shrugged her off returning to the conversation at hand. Again she did this, not understanding.
“Look we need to talk,” Sarah said. Tyler looked down into her eyes and could tell something was off.
“I'll catch up to you guys later.” He said as he dragged her away. When they found a secluded spot he let loose all his anger.
“Whats wrong?” She asked.
“What the hell do you think?” He shouted. “I saw you up on that stage, how could you do something like that?” She gasped looked down at her feet, biting her nails.
“Look you don't understand...” she whispered. “I can explain.”
“No you look. You either drop the job or we are through.” With that he left her as she slumped against the wall gently crying.

That night curiosity got the better of him again. When Sarah got off work, he followed her back home wondering if there wasn't something he was missing. When she got to the door a middle aged women stepped out, and Sarah pulled out money. Drugs? Tyler thought. She had the same look on her face, the one she had while she was on that stage. The older women left, and through open curtains Tyler watched her. She disappeared into a room, and came back out and entered another he can see into. How had he never noticed it? Sarah bent down low over a crib, and pulled up a baby girl.

“Did I ever tell you I used to play?” her words rang clearly inside his head as Sarah kissed her daughter on the forehead. A mix of sorrow and pride on her face. It wasn't until then did he realize he had never been inside her house. The missing pieces of the puzzle were no longer missing. Tyler sat there, crying and hating himself for being weak.

The End

If you were wondering it was the music video Let Me Go by 3 Doors Down.

Unit7's picture

Heh I can't believe I almost forgot about this story...

But its not the one I am seeking... *digs deeper through the pile of ancient posts*


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secret_life8's picture

i really like that song! =)

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It is a good song Big smile


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secret_life8's picture

that was good.

"A friend walks in when everyone else walks out." ~unknown~
Be a friend to pregnant girls.
Proudly in these clubs:
Waiting, wishing i waited, belive in waiting & Prolife
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Hannah_Banana222's picture

Very good! Smiling
Just wondering...How's the Black Cat coming? Sticking out tongue

"It is hard for decent people to stay angry at someone who has burst into tears, which is why it is often a good idea to burst into tears when a decent person is yelling at you."
-Lemony Snicket
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Oh you know haven't started on the last part...

But its all *taps his finger against his temple* right up here... *thinks for a moment*

Oh Shi-


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mermaidgirl5's picture

I give it two thumbs up! I liked the twist you had at the end. Big smile

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To bad I can't take credit for it.

Smiling


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-Rex-'s picture

I refuse to have any contact with the scum from the fifrth dimension. However since I saw that Unit from the Sixth Dminesion who is a very honourable person made the commentary I guess I can make an exception this tiem

Nice story. I liked the twist at the end. I thought you would have gone for a sick relative but a baby is even more interestig since it brings up even more issues. On one hand guilt because of how he treated her but then again probably another feeling of betrayal as he could feel betrayed that she never told him about her daughter. And then there is the panicky moment of realising that there is now a baby in his life since the girl he loves is his life and so on and so on. Tyler is so screwed up Sticking out tongue

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Sadly I can't exactly take credit for the ending.

Hey we Fifth Dimension people are not all that bad!! Though technically I was just strandad here when I was younger...


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xTSN2008x's picture

I enjoyed this story, just like all of your others Smiling The "I used to play" part reminds me of myself, but with basketball not soccer. Anyway, great job!

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Unit7's picture

That must have sucked.

I thought the part where she used to play would be a nice touch and to foreshadow the final secret that something must have happened for her to stop playing a sport she obviously loves.

Thanks for the comments Smiling


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dare_2dream1996's picture

Great JoB (:

here we go PHILLIES! <3

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Thanks for reading Smiling


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SilentxxStrength83's picture

That was amazing! I really loved it! You're a very talented writer. Smiling

~Chasity~

Unit7's picture

Thanks for the comments. I wish I felt like that. Oh well having terrible selfdoubt is part of the job... that or maybe its just me *shrugs*


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SilentxxStrength83's picture

You shouldn't have selfdoubt. You have very good writing skills. Just ask anyone here. Big smile

~Chasity~

Unit7's picture

Maybe, but I frequent writersforum that has a mix of both amatuers such as myself and published authors and whatnot and I feel my stuff just fails incomparison. Oh well. It wont stop me from writing Big smile


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maggiemay94's picture

That was really good Unit! I loved it!

"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain."
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Thanks Big smile


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pinkcupcake's picture

I loved it Unit! But I got lost at the end ): So she has a daughter, but who was the lady she gave money to?

Today I was eating a cupcake when the phone rang. I panicked and stuffed the entire cupcake into my mouth. I still don't know why I did that. MLIA

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In my story I wanted it to be the mother. But I think its the Baby sitter. In the Music Video the Girl is seen handing an older lady some money as she leaves. But in my story I just left it as the baby sitter.


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ayan's picture

Dude this is a good story. I mean it shows how people struggle in life. And how we will do about anything to support the ones we love. Anyway awesome story, as always good job Unit. Smiling

Just call me Ayan.

Hang in there, Mar. I love you Habiby.

Unit7's picture

Thanks. I got the story down, now I just need to work on the wording and description.
*mumbles to himself*
Now I wonder. Should I finish Death Note: The Library Gathering, The Budding Rose, or The Black Cat?

Hmmm I wonder how many other stories I have yet to finish. lol


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ayan's picture

You are welcome. Are you planing on continuing this story. I really think you shouldn't write a new story until you finish those. It is going to save you from stress Sticking out tongue .

Just call me Ayan.

Hang in there, Mar. I love you Habiby.

Unit7's picture

Nope this story is over and done. In the video it shows the guy sitting out in his car watching his exputting her daughter down. Who grabs a picture of Him and Her together. I thought I would end the story in a similar fashion, and leave what happens in the air.


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ayan's picture

O key, well then finish your other stories then.

Just call me Ayan.

Hang in there, Mar. I love you Habiby.

Unit7's picture

Yeah but I don't know which one I should finish first Sticking out tongue


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ayan's picture

Well finish the one that you think is going to take the least amount of time. Sticking out tongue

Just call me Ayan.

Hang in there, Mar. I love you Habiby.

Unit7's picture

*shrugs* but I don't know which that would be. I mean I can be very creative in how I kill off most of a small town(Death Note story)

But I could also have a whole 10 chapters for The Budding Rose. I mean right now I feel that I have rushed the whole thing, which may force my hand to rewrite it all.

The Black Cat I guess would be the easiest to finish but...

*wanders off debating with himself*


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ayan's picture

Maybe you should flip a coin, that always works for me. But your choices are more than two. Well think about it and finish the black cat since it is the easiest one.

Just call me Ayan.

Hang in there, Mar. I love you Habiby.

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Yeah probably


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